Examples of Writing for Paper 1 Section A

Hello once again Form 4 students ...

Today and tomorrow your task will be to rewrite (omG!) the paper/s that you wrote for the exam (ergh!) you took last week.

This exercise will provide EXAMPLES for students to use next year, when we/they/you need to do these sorts of exams (ergh!) again. So this is a good thing to do and you will benefit not only yourselves now, but also yourselves and each other, in the future.

This is your opportunity to actually learn from the red pen that is dancing across your pages (do you like that metaphor? - or do you think that "bleeding into the paper" is a better one?). Hmmm ... I prefer the dancing one ...
Anyhow, use that red pen and your writing in your first draft to revise / redraft your Section A paper 1s. You can add or change your original ideas.

You also need to put a short "Preface" to your writing which gives your opinion of your story; introducing the reader to it.

lots of fond regards,

Sir Lance

Monday, November 10, 2008